Our Pitch

Pitch

Feedback:

Suitability of Target Audience:

• Mixed Responses
• Majority of feedback found it suitable

Comments on Originality:

• people seemed to find our idea unoriginal and with large amounts of redundancy, which to an extent it was
• we need to come up with something slightly more entropic and original for our final video

Comments on Logistics:

• people found our logistics well thought through

Comments on technical aspects:

• our feedback told us that our idea is achievable

Realism:

• people found our concepts realistic achievable and within budget

Overall:

• our ideas were found as simple and fairly unexciting
• other comments; achievable, in budget, needs more, bit more planning ideas

we need to build on our idea to make it better and deeper, we need to add more ideas and concepts to our video to make it more exciting and engaging.

we should maintain the achievable-ness of our idea but make it more ambitious

Targets:

• recreate our video as more creative and exciting
• maintain the good aspects of our ideas while improving them